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The Old Man Who Made Whistles

Story by Tom Sheehan (Read author interview) March 15, 2004

In a country that had no name because it had no borders lived an old man who lived at the side of the road and made whistles. Making whistles was all he ever wanted to do. Each time he made a whistle and tested it, he would make a present of it for a boy or girl who passed his small house.

The old man had no big dreams and no thoughts of grandeur. His house was a small house and once the forest behind his house had been thick and heavy with trees. Now it was sparser because of all the whistles he had whittled out of its trees. Boys and girls everywhere played his whistles. But the thinning forest still had nice shade and was a fine place to walk.

Each morning the man would sit on his rocker on the porch and listen to the birds. When the light of day came upon them, they began to whistle and send out signals to their friends. Very closely he would listen, picking up every sound that came out of the forest. He heard every peep and every chirp and there never was a bird’s song that he did not hear. After a while of listening he would settle on a sound or a song that best suited him for the day. He would set off for the forest to find a piece of wood to whittle to capture that sound forever.

In the forest came a kind of magic with the old man’s search for the right piece of wood. It was without fail that he’d find the right piece. It could be sitting in its place as a nice branch on a maple tree or it could be a strip of oak that lightning had driven away from its home at the top of a tree. Now and then it would be the shape of a piece of wood that caught his eye instead of his ear. But it was always the right piece.

And he always gave away the whistles that he made.

Oh, how he loved new songs the birds whistled, and he could tell practically which day of the year it was, the day of the season, because of the birds that stayed or the ones that already had journeyed far away. Some of the birds would end up way down in the other end of the world and would be gone for months. Some little red birds stayed all year long, singing songs for the old man. He loved the ones who stayed and the ones who traveled.

One day, when he had fallen asleep in his late afternoon nap, a passing thief stole the old man’s knife. How sad he was. How sad the children were when no whistles were being made. Someone in town said the birds had stopped singing, that the forest was a dark and dismal and quiet place that could frighten any soul. The leaves began to fall in the forest. And then the snow fell.

And the old man was sadder each day he could not whittle.

Then one bright morning a new knife was on his porch. The old man did not know who left it there. But he suddenly heard a bird call from the forest. Out he went and found a piece of wood exactly as he thought it should be. The whistle caught the new birdcall perfectly and the old man hung the whistle on his fence.

Now all the boys and girls knew what had happened and none of them took the whistle away.

Next day the old man heard another bird and made another whistle and hung that one on his fence. But no one took it. He was sad, but making whistles was what he always wanted to do, so he kept at it.

The birds kept calling and he kept making whistles and he kept hanging them on his fence. And still, nobody came to take the whistles.

Day after day, for the longest time, he heard the birds and made his whistles and hung them for the boys and girls. Each night he was sad. But he knew he would never stop making whistles. Birds were beautiful when they sang and his whistles were beautiful when they were played and somehow someone would come along to play lovely tunes on the small shafts of wood.

Soon there were hundreds of whistles hanging on his fence and not a single one had been taken. No boy or girl ever tried to play one or blow air into the mouthpiece or even tried to finger the little air holes. Not a single boy or girl tried one out.

And it was late that winter the old man became sick and lay in his bed and the mayor and some other people came from the town when they heard about his trouble. And the old man told them his life had been a good life and he had no regrets except that he wished the boys and girls would come to take his whistles off the fence. But even if they don’t, he said, he had been happy making his whistles.

And then, late in the afternoon, the wind began to blow from the edge of the forest. It blew quick and steady down the length of the old man’s fence. The old man and the mayor and the other people suddenly heard the most marvelous sounds they had ever heard, great and magical notes of every range imaginable, a most beautiful music to be remembered forever.

And the old man who made whistles all his life finally and happily closed his eyes as he heard music coming from the strangest organ ever played.

About the Author

Tom Sheehan had two books published in 2003, This Rare Earth & Other Flights, poetry from Lit Pot Press, and Death for the Phantom Receiver, an NFL mystery from Publish America. He has had over 500 pieces published on the Internet and in print.

This story appeared in Issue Three of SmokeLong Quarterly.
SmokeLong Quarterly Issue Three

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