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Story by Erin Vachon (Read author interview) September 19, 2022

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we couldn’t stop the stalker-comet’s approach, slippery in the sky. comets don’t sweat repercussions. they shatter on impact. we braced. the astro-psychiatrist diagnosed its trajectory from earth. compound: hot-cold narcissistic-rock formation. we live here, we said, go away, a message that nasa shot into space, binary code lodged like a needle into the comet’s side. stalker-comet remained undeterred. the astro-psychiatrist said, comets don’t sweat small scrapes, they smash atmospheric layers. they have issues with boundaries. visible in the daylight, there was no escape. we held onto our dogs, our mail deliverers, finally our own unreliable brains. that’s the comet, the astro-psychiatrist said, gaslighting your sense of personal history, manipulating your mind with its explosive chemistry. comets track your movements so casually, as if they haven’t sprinted across the universe after you. so many vacancies where worlds used to live, stalker-comets blazing across the sky to their finish line, worlds finished, and how do we stop them, they don’t submit to any astro-psychological testing, they destroy every planet with assessment facilities, we just don’t have enough data, all these sweatless, poreless comets, they’re so intelligent, and passionate, and beautiful, and perfect, and we all love comets more than any other rock in the universe, maybe we should reconsider shooting it out of the sky, gaze upon its hallucinogenic light trail, its chemical vapor, that’s not sweat, no don’t cover your eyes, it’s approaching, it won’t hurt us, comets swear to love us fully, our oceans rise to meet our fiery lover, behold the salty sweaty tears of reunion.

 

About the Author

Erin Vachon is Senior Reviews Editor at SmokeLong Quarterly and the Multigenre + Chapbook Editor for Split/Lip Press. They have served on the masthead at The Rumpus, Longleaf Review, and JMWW, as well as being an editorial panelist for Sarabande’s 2025 Mary McCarthy Prize in Short Fiction. Their work appears in SmokeLong Quarterly, Black Warrior Review, DIAGRAM, Hayden’s Ferry Review, The Pinch, Brevity, The Anarchist Review of Books, and other venues. Their writing has been selected for the Wigleaf Top 50 and nominated for the Pushcart Prize, Best Small Fictions, Best of Net, and Best Microfiction series. They are on the English Department adjunct faculty at Rhode Island College and live outside Providence, Rhode Island.

This story appeared in A SmokeLong Summer 2022 — Special Issue of SmokeLong Quarterly.
SmokeLong Quarterly A SmokeLong Summer 2022 — Special Issue
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