SmokeLong Quarterly

Share This f l Translate this page

Smoke & Mirrors with Emily Devane

Interview by Sara Hills (Read the Story) June 21, 2021

Emily Devane

Emily Devane

In “Too Long Under Water,” you weave a textural and emotional narrative using real and imagined crocodiles, evoking the urgency of an implied ticking clock. How did you find your way into this story?

My stories are often rooted in memory—lingering moments of fear, excitement and discovery that become the patchwork of our adult selves. As a child, I visited a zoo with a crocodile just like Buster. That deadly stillness held me in thrall. I carried around the image, that feeling of wrongness, for years, before finding a route into this piece. The start and end remained intact throughout edits but when this unexpected character, Uncle Billy, pressed the coin into the child narrator’s hand—that’s when the story emerged.

You create what Robert Olen Butler calls an “omnisensual cinema” by employing a close lens on the trajectory of that seven-sided coin. The crocodile parallelism, along with reptilian alliteration, heightens our fear. How do sensory description and sound influence your work?

Sensory recollection is a powerful tool for writers. I have a sieve-like memory for facts, yet I recall childhood scenes in vivid detail—the layout of my infant school classroom, the feel of sticky glue between my fingers, the whistle of a stovetop kettle. Lengthy description can weigh a story down, but not if pressed into double duty. In this story the coin carries the story arc, while also bearing emotional and symbolic weight, and Billy becomes reptilian.

Rhythm and sound matter, too. When editing, I try not to interfere too much with the natural rhythm of early drafts. I consider the sound words make and their narrative impact. Breathing space in the text allows readers to develop their own trails of thought. Stories are conversations, really.

The opening and final images elicit childhood sense-memories of long-held coins. What is your approach to achieving emotional resonance?

Central to my teaching is the idea of making writing particular, making the familiar feel new. I’m drawn to museums, old books, photographs and objects, unexpected sights and overheard snippets of conversation. Interesting things happen where thoughts collide. Sometimes, I’ll read something that turns an anchorless idea into a meaningful narrative. Prompts that trigger memories—of places, objects, feelings—tend to result in emotionally resonant stories. A story might stray far from memory, but if the original emotion is retained, the writing will be richer for it.

About the Author

Emily Devane is a writer, teacher and editor from Ilkley, West Yorkshire. Her stories have won prizes, including The Bath Flash Fiction Award, a Northern Writers’ Award and a Word Factory Apprenticeship. Recent stories have been published in New Flash Fiction Review, Janus and Lost Balloon, and her work has been chosen for the Best Microfictions Anthology. Emily teaches creative writing, co-runs Word Factory’s Strike Short Story Club and is an editor at FlashBack Fiction.

About the Interviewer

Sara Hills is the author of the award-winning flash collection The Evolution of Birds. Her stories have been selected for Wigleaf’s Top 50, The Best Small Fictions, and the BIFFY50, as well as widely published in anthologies and magazines, such as SmokeLong Quarterly, Cheap Pop, X-R-A-Y Literary Magazine, Fractured Lit, Flash Frog, and Reckon Review. Originally from the Sonoran Desert, Sara lives in Warwickshire, UK and tweets from @sarahillswrites.

This interview appeared in Issue Seventy-Two of SmokeLong Quarterly.
SmokeLong Quarterly Issue Seventy-Two

Support SmokeLong Quarterly

Your donation helps writers and artists get paid for their work. If you’re enjoying what you read here, please consider donating to SmokeLong Quarterly today.

SmokeLong Fitness--The Community Workshop

Book Now!

Book SmokeLong Fitness now to begin December 1, 2023. If you’ve done a SmokeLong workshop before, you can join for just $300!