On the train, a girl licks the window and her mother tells her to stop licking the window, but the girl carries on, and there’s me thinking let her lick the window, the cold must feel nice on her tongue, she’s licking the trees through the glass, the buildings, the schools, the cyclists, let her lick, she’s licking the traffic lights, the potholed people, the cows, and her mother yanks her by the hood and the girl’s zip digs into her throat as she falls back, squashed against the buggy with a baby in it, stay put the mother says, and I say but she wasn’t doing any harm, let her lick the fucking window, and the mother says something mean and another passenger says something which is probably to back her up because they’re both looking at me and then another passenger starts shaking his head and there’s the storm in my ears again, a thousand thunders, and I’m back in the damp shed and the door is locked from the outside and you have to seriously think, I mean seriously think, about what you have done if you want to come back in the house, and through the slits sits the moon and the moon is all mine and when I reach with my tongue I can taste it.
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“Mother Tongue,” third-place winner in The SmokeLong Grand Micro Competition, appeared originally in The Citron Review.
In its third year, The March Micro Marathon will be, as usual, a prompt-a-day whirlwind for 24 days. You’ll exchange drafts of micro fiction, non-fiction, and prose poetry in small groups and gather for a series of online events (all recorded for participants unable to attend live). We’ll finish with 3 competitions, and participants who are not already in SmokeLong Fitness will be invited to workshop with SmokeLong Fitness until the end of April!