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I See You

Story by Christine H. Chen (Read author interview) December 16, 2024

Art by SmokeLong

Ah Ba says he sees particles drifting, flying everywhere, rains of dust, he says, speckles that land on the back of his hands, “see, see” he tells me, even though he’s blind.

He says, dust balls into blobs that float in his line of vision; he scrambles to follow them, points his fingers at the air, “see, see” he says, for me to get a glimpse of the invisible clouds, and I push away the chair that stands in his way for fear he’ll trip and fall.

He braces himself for the flood of dust falling, falling on his head in the garden where our clothes are drying, “see, see, how the dust has covered the bedsheets” and he paints swirls of dust with his palms in a floral pattern, “see, see what I’m saying” he says, and tells me to shake the drying sheet, the two of us, holding two corners of the bedsheet, shake, shake, shake until sunset.

Dust never sleeps, he says, and he wears a cardboard box on his head when he goes to bed.

“See, see!” he says to Ah Ma who’s livid, and calls him crazy, see how dust collects in his ear, in his nose, how dust is trapped between the closet hinges, how he’s packaged everything he wears in plastic bags, and finally, I touch his arm with the tip of my fingers like dust settling on him, and I tell him, “I see, I see what you see, Ah Ba.”

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“I See You” won second place in The SmokeLong Grand Micro Contest 2024.

About the Author

Christine H. Chen was born in Hong Kong and grew up in Madagascar before settling in Boston where she worked as a research chemist. Her fiction has appeared in The Pinch, Fractured Lit, CRAFT, Pithead Chapel, Atticus Review, and other journals and anthologies. Her work was selected for inclusion in Wigleaf Top 50 Very Short Fictions 2023, Best Microfiction 2024, and Best Small Fictions 2024. She is a recipient of the 2022 Mass Cultural Council Artist Fellowship. Read her stories at www.christinehchen.com

This story appeared in Issue Eighty-Six of SmokeLong Quarterly.
SmokeLong Quarterly Issue Eighty-Six
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The SmokeLong Grand Micro Contest

Deadline November 15th!

The SmokeLong Grand Micro Contest (The Mikey) is now an annual competition celebrating and compensating the best micro fiction and nonfiction online.

The grand prize winner of The Mikey is automatically nominated for Best Small Fictions and any other prize we deem appropriate. In addition, we will pay the grand prize winner $1000. Second place: $500. Third place $300. Finalists: $100. All finalists and placers will be published in the December ’25 issue of SmokeLong.

Previously published as well as previously unpublished work will be considered.